Edge recommends the following query model below. Note this does not include a long story pitch or short synopsis (which will sink you if you don't know how to artfully write it), but rather a single hook line (which will also sink you for the same reason). Note that comparables (at least two) are vital to your novel. Dear Mr. or Ms. (name of agent): Background "I recently completed a novel similar to The Art of Racing in the Rain , which I know your agency represents ( or the following one because it shows you've done your homework like a professional ), I read in Publishers Marketplace that you represented XYZ to ABC, and thought you might be interested in taking a look at a novel I just completed." NOTE: the credential paragraph below can be moved to second to last paragraph, and if no creds then rely on the story hook . ___ Professional credentials, platform, or relevant background "I have 50,000+ followers on social media pl...